In the present day, the government deciding to install lots of camcorders in public places which lessen people committing infraction. It is frequently said that these solutions affect to privacy. While I accept that these measures can sometimes have beneficial effects on residents, I believe that there are more likely to have a beneficial influence.
On the one hand, camera have negative impact for community. Along with technology development, camcorder are more common, being a vital role in the world. They appeared in a number of places which frequent have crowed and noisy. However, they have psychological impact to people in society such as anxious, stress, etc. for instance, while you go out with your friend, drive your car, have a date with you boyfriend or girlfriend, you will be monitored by camera in public place. This will make a picture a bout privacy existence of person. All people have individual life, and they do not want other or government control them.
On the other hand, I believe that there are more benefits for using surveillance equipment. Beside the developed society, there are dramatically increase social evils on the world. It can be witness that minor crimes such as shoplifting or pick pocketing, serious crimes such as robbery or murder are also extremely crowded, and they pose a serious threat to society. Therefore, cameras come out in humanity being an effective solution which serve as a determent crimes. When people commit crimes, camera will record their behavior. As a result, it would greatly contribute to crime reduction and citizen will have a sense of safety, security.
In conclusion, the video cameras have a number of drawbacks, on the contrary in my view, they help protect society from any threat. Therefore, on balance, the advantages outweigh the challenges of using cameras in community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17218543046 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73148101826 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2438585687 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0637826673359 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0197524333368 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277775734554 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334285002577 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286721154936 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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