Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the proportion of criminal is increase dramatically. To prevent the leap of criminal, studies have maintained that the crime rates would plunge if the people have been educated about it, while others suppose that criminals have to be educated when they still in prison. In my opinion, the best way to reduce the surging of criminal rates is let people educated about it.
Mostly, the criminal rates would be decrease if we let the people under the education degrees. This is because those people would know about various of consequences of being a criminal before someone decided to do something bad. This method could be used for everyone, especially children. Children are more likely to understand and receive the information faster than older people. Another reason is when children still under the education programs, they have no chance and environment to do the negative things. For instance, if a student do something bad such as stealing, bullying,…, they would be punish by teachers and their parents, so they would never make the same mistake again.
Open criminals mind while they are still in prison maybe a not too bad idea; nevertheless, this method just only effective for the people who really regret and understand their sitiuation. Others who still recalcitrant would not be effect by this method.
In conclusion, There is a variety of ways to deteriorate the criminal rates, but the most effective way is l educate people when they was a student.
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Suggestion: the; a
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Suggestion: , …
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07317073171 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67625432893 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.230026434 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269737590029 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100401220387 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830798653606 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172543747277 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888813477267 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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