Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person.
Why do you think this is the case?
What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is argued that many adolescents are likely to use social neworks to communicate each other instead of face to face meeting. This essay will look into some reasons and then offer viable solutions to solve it.
There are many causes leading to this issues. Firstly, some introvert people feel less confident when they communicate with others, they lack of communication skills, as a result they find out an easier way which is discuss online with others. In fact, when people communicate through a screen, they will not be shy to share their opinions. The second reason worth mentioning is technological development. Virtual reality technology, for example, helps people feel more reality but they still communicate through an online network. There are more new online systems to satify with needs of people such as Tiktok for short clips, Telegram for chatting and exchanging data.
Several actions should be taken to address this problem. The first solution worth mentioning is organizing social activities or sport competitions to improve communication skills. when people take part in physical activities, they not only maintain their health, but they also improve communication skill through team working or communicating in social activities. Secondly, teenagers need to be educated about the detrimental of online activities. Hazards on the internet can come to us whenever such as security, negative comments and so on which are harmful to mental users and sometime leading to bad consequences. These educations can be planned by responsible people such as parents or school, they have to accompany to direct adolescents to the right way in online society.
To conclude, although there are many causes, steps can be taken to deal with this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
...lt they find out an easier way which is discuss online with others. In fact, when peopl...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...itions to improve communication skills. when people take part in physical activities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29642857143 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78831151819 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603571428571 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7267244982 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970170315387 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421934737022 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357932649646 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677243930648 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200524403439 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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