Success is often measured by wealth and materials belongings Do you think wealth is the best measure of success What makes a successful person

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Success is often measured by wealth and materials belongings . Do you think wealth is the best measure of success ? . What makes a successful person?

Majority of people consider that success indicates wealth different materials which people have. I think that success incorporating a lot of money, luxurious houses or expensive cars.
In my point of view,currently, wealth and labour play a huge role part of life to achieve success. We need study and work hard to earn money much and feed their family. If they are wealth that they can not work for example, they go to the relaxation country say country Dubai to enjoy and spend time their family. They buy the most expensive car like "Lamborghini" and luxurious house. They purchase a fashionable clothes to separate other people and that is why if we are affluent, we can say, we are the most successful and happiest person in the world.
On the other hand, in order to be a successful person, first of all, we need study to achieve dreams. In addition, we must analyze our mistakes to understand and we never must give up If we lose heart that we can not move on. For instance, Elon Musk who never gave up in life. He created and built anything which he wanted and obtained so-called "SpaceX" which is flown on space, he has many experiences in that. When he was kid, he was unfortunate person, day by day he fixed his life.
To conclude, wealthy is the best way to attain success. Additionally, to be successful, we need to persue our dreams and we must be ready on the difficulties.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67068273092 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96356699111 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574297188755 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9531489928 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0714285714 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165818891173 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698207549084 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769904552202 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125708431829 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770931285289 0.056905535591 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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