Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professionals. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair
Professionals have a high position in our society due to their talent and ability to make communities better. One of them is the specialized athlete which can be received more payment than other experts. Certain individuals think this is underserved while others think this is acceptable.I totally agree to some extent.
On one hand, I understand why it can be argued that it is unjust for sport players to have a higher salary than others professionals. Although sports have been developed dramatically through the past years, it hasn’t play an important role in our civilization compared with others expert such like scientist, doctor,teacher,etc. To prove this, we have a pharmacist who creates medecine to save people life, a teacher brought a lot of knowledge to a person or a police that keep us harmless. Beside, some nations may demand on sports and spend too much money on it although their finance is not stable. For instance, Oman is a country that has spent billions to built a huge stadium despite their evolving porverty- strickens. Therefore, it is seemd to only be right that they should have a good salary due to their contribution for their community.
On other hand, I believe professional sport athlete deserve to have a good payment. Because of their salary related to their achievement and performance, sport contestant have to training hard that make they expert a lot. Otherwise, during a competition, there is still existed risk of accident which can bring pain and trauma to the players. This can also lead to mental illness or worse is the death. But if specialized athlete can achieve any medal or prize in a contest such as Olympic, how honor and proud they can take for their country. Their triumph will inspire many individuals from all ages. Another reason is that science expert or doctor can have a stable job until the age of 60 while with professional sport athlete, their performance can only be the best in a certain years.
In conclusion, there are still some argument for the unfair in the specialized sport athlete payment but I believe their higher salary is worthy based on what they do for their society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91780821918 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79685102933 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567123287671 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5475273616 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.588235294 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235570913734 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768736632896 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693934473369 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153936986731 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868573499181 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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