Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Sport could be considered as a multimillion value industry due to its tremendous effects.Thus, sport professionals are those who would earn a huge amount of income based on international competitions, leading to concerns about whether the money paid for each sports employees, for examples, soccers, basketball players,... are justified or unfair. In this essay, I’ll discuss both perspectives and give my personal thoughts about this phenomenon.
On the one hand, it’s true to say sports professionals deserve a higher salary because of their contributions. Inferred from the fact that in order to be able to join international competitions, participants would have to physically fit to severe conditions, which means that sports players have to suffer demanding training sessions. Moreover, energetic professions like sports can help to enhance citizens’ patriotism and solidarity. Practically in Vietnam, whenever there is a victory from the Vietnamese football team, it’s easy to witness crowded streets filled with Vietnam Nation Flags, leading to a friendly environment. Relatively, these occasions should be seen as a particular event where national people can show their gratitude to their nation.
On the other hand, some ideas state that it’s unfair for other professions to receive less money income although they still bring necessary values to society. Despite the positive sides of sports, other majors or careers are being underestimated, for example, teachers, programmers, MC, etc. One recent research shows that the monthly estimated salary of a teacher is approximately 6 million VND, while prices to rent a house, to pay utilities are increasing leading to life pressures. Furthermore, some people emphasize that governments should pay more attention to these educational fields rather than recreational ones because learning and studying are way far more important in developing a country, not entertaining activities like sports.
To deduce, I personally think that sports professionals can earn a higher volume of salary but participants will have to face with risks like injuries or damages in a race or competitions, they tend to sacrifice their physical health in order to guarantee the best achievements brought to their countries, thus, sports professionals are not consistent careers because once a match season ended, another generation will replace the previous ones. What’s more is that working in educational environments is considerably safer and more permanent.
In conclusion, I think that governments should pay more attention to create suitable wages for several majors.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... industry due to its tremendous effects.Thus, sport professionals are those who woul...
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...or examples, soccers, basketball players,... are justified or unfair. In this essa...
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Suggestion:
...rsonal thoughts about this phenomenon. On the one hand, it’s true to say sports...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... show their gratitude to their nation. On the other hand, some ideas state that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68274111675 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14236671175 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621827411168 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.097905082 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.266666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260870728482 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789741489844 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486673596072 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125995068646 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456712149942 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... industry due to its tremendous effects.Thus, sport professionals are those who woul...
^^^^
Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...or examples, soccers, basketball players,... are justified or unfair. In this essa...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rsonal thoughts about this phenomenon. On the one hand, it’s true to say sports...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... show their gratitude to their nation. On the other hand, some ideas state that...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68274111675 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14236671175 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621827411168 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.097905082 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.266666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260870728482 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789741489844 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486673596072 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125995068646 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456712149942 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.