Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for ageing individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society?
The increasing life qualities provided people to live longer than before. There is no doubt that the improvement of life leads to some economic issues on individuals and society.
The trend of families structure have become smaller and smaller recently years, the birth rates have been the lowest even before. Most of the citizens prefer smaller nuclear families than traditional larger expanded families. One of the reasons for this changing is that it would decline an individual's household expenditures. Different from big families past time, the one-born child needs to take all the responsibilities on taking care of his parents. It's true that there will put high financial pressure for an employee on taking care of both their children and elderly parents. For facing the increasing aged popularities problems, some citizens even need to rely on government subsidies.
Noticeably, many developed countries have to confront an unbalanced workforce issue. The growth of geriatric is even higher than the activity population nowadays, there are more retired people in the community, but less new employees in the working area, this result has a direct effect on countries economic because the society workforce is low. Moreover, higher demand for medical treatment from elderly people will put pressure on the hospital system. Moreover, the Government needs to involve more profit to build facilities such as the nursing house, also means that younger citizens need to pay higher taxes in order to afford the ageing populations.
Since taking care of elderly people is traditionally responsibilities for individuals and society, it also put pressure on both financial problems
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
... this changing is that it would decline an individuals household expenditures. Different from ...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...penditures. Different from big families past time, the one-born child needs to take all t...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll put pressure on the hospital system. Moreover, the Government needs to involve more p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4465648855 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82499736359 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2403836766 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218418026336 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759170250904 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648789621461 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13841293925 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440589600174 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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