TA: 6
CC: 7
LR: 6
GRA: 7
=> Overall: 6.5
Nowadays, there are some changes in the role of family members and its structure. In my opinion, these changes can bring both benefits and risks to many family on these day.
On the one hand, there are some changes on these day can help family member become happier and understand more about each other. First, nowadays, men in every family have to share the work with the women. For example, in my city, I can see that the men in recent have to help some work at home with famels such as wahsing dishes, prepare meals with their wife and takes their child to school. Although all of them just a small task every day, these activities can make their wife feel better and also release their stress. Moreover, children these days also play an important role in every family so that they can have a chance to discuss about every thing with the parents in family.
On the other hand, these new rule can also bring many negative impact on many family. Firstly, because of the generation gaps, sometimes what the children say can make their parents angry and therefore, some parents oftent beat the child. This activity just makes them scare more and more. Moreover, men nowaday have to do many works that they do not want to do anything more. Therefore, I can see some family have argued and broken.
In conclusion, although nowadays, have some rule that can bring back many benefits such as make family member understand more about other, it can also have some risks that bring negative impact on family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...th benefits and risks to many family on these day. On the one hand, there are some chang...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...the one hand, there are some changes on these day can help family member become happier a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'many families'.
Suggestion: many families
... can also bring many negative impact on many family. Firstly, because of the generation gap...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6329588015 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05494802207 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483146067416 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8188148458 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1538461538 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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