TASK 2: Buying things on the internet such as books,air tickets and groceries,,is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Online marketing is of particular interest to most people this days, while some believe it is of keen interest to them as it relieves them of stress while they get things easily done others opined it is stupendous to shop online because they do not get the exact of products displayed on the internet.
This essay will discuss both advantage and disadvantage of shopping online and give reasons for my answer.
Firstly, internet transactions has paved way to get so many things done at ease ,as online payment is faster and easier and you get your products delivered to your doorstep.
Also booking of air tickets online has saved a lot of people the headache of travelling by road to make payment and thus reduction of Road Traffic Accidents.
Moreso, products are easily displayed and people have choices to make from various online site.
Although online shopping has its own advantages, it's not without its own disadvantages which includes not been able to vouch for the quality of the products as the quality of the product displayed on the computer cannot be guaranteed.
Though things are done easily with no or little stress, however goods and services displayed and advertised most times is been enlarged and people get to know when such when such products have been delivered to them, this alone is quite stressful and unbecoming.
In addition, products that people dislike cannot be returned to the point of sales for example it will have been written on most products that goods ordered and purchased cannot be returned to the point of sales if individuals dislike it.
Though the disadvantages of online marketing outweigh the advantages,more and more people still prefer the latter because of the ease it has brought in this era where major countries of the world are going on cashless policy where online payment make it easier and the modalities of payment is via online transaction.
- Buying things on the internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own experienc 67
- Buying things on the internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own experienc 67
- TASK 2 Buying things on the internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own ex 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s of particular interest to most people this days, while some believe it is of keen ...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d way to get so many things done at ease ,as online payment is faster and easier a...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...r products delivered to your doorstep. Also booking of air tickets online has saved...
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Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...online shopping has its own advantages, its not without its own disadvantages which...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ed. Though things are done easily with no or little stress, however goods and ser...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'when such'.
Suggestion: when such
...is been enlarged and people get to know when such when such products have been delivered to them, t...
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , more
...online marketing outweigh the advantages,more and more people still prefer the latter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58816416597 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503125 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0172170232 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.444444444 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5555555556 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187118094476 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823516280101 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058274189961 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823516280101 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058274189961 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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