task 2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

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task 2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals claim that scientific studies should be conducted by governments instead of companies. I agree with the view that not only governments but every company needs to be responsible for carrying out research activities

To begin with, there is no doubt that the authorities have a responsibility to conduct scientific research including both basic scientific and practical scientific studies. This is because the governments of different countries can easily co-operate with each other, they may be able to conduct studies on a larger scale, which require a larger investment. For instance, the collaboration between the UK and the EU is to deal with climate change, tackle infectious diseases in people, animals and plants. Thanks to these collaborations, the top scientists across countries can resolve these complicated challenges worldwide. Another reason for this is that governments tend to pay attention to research areas that can benefit society as a whole. Many Studies related to environmental issues and crime rates are great examples.

However, I would argue that companies play such an important role in conducting practical scientific research because of its result which will create profit and also it is the top priority of each company, they would make an effort to conduct research more quickly and more efficiently. For example, a company, like Teva has been carrying out extensive research to solve generic drug problem and then provide them for patients. This can lower out-of-pocket costs patients. The second, when private companies invest in research fields, the constraint of finance on government’s budget will be relieved, helping government have more cash to spend on other main areas including accommodation, health and medical services or education. This might lead to improvement in the quality of life of the whole community.

In inclusion, I believe that both governments and private companies should be involved in research activities.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, no doubt, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52287581699 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06061759576 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7388488986 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253004985351 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864170789301 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858906705074 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200062322069 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888507434524 0.056905535591 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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