Task 2 Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Task 2 Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, economic has becoming in matter of discussion. Some people feel that economic development is the best way to finish poverty and hunger, whereas others say that this is destroying the natural habitat and should halt. In this essay, I will examine the both of sides and an overall opinion should be provided.

There are several reasons why some people feel that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Firstly, developed economics assist to have many fields in jobs and it leads to people having remain stable jobs. For example, when commercial shoes in Vietnam consumed a significant rise and expose to other countries such as converse shoes , it will promoted economic in the own country to growing faster. Therefore, many companies need to have a large number of employees to work in produced items so it leads to reduce unemployment rates. Secondly, criminals can diminish because of economic increase. For instance, when economics grow rapid, the government can helps offenders to find jobs and then everyone have remain the same careers to improve their lives.

There are numerous reasons why some people believe that this is damaging the natural environment and should stop. First of all, animals do not habitat in forests if economic rise. This is because economic rise lead to construct many companies or establish industrial zones. For this reason, people cut down a lots of trees to building factories so animals do not have places where they live. As a result, a large number of animals are able to disappear or be extincted due to lack of forests. Furthermore, ocean brings people many valuable things such as oil, fauna and flora in sea. To illustrate, some people exploit oil beyond rules of the government or catch both large and small fish to buy in commercial markets because they want to earn more profits for themself. Thus, it has caused water pollution and not be balance ecosystem.

In conclusion, some people say that economic increase is the best way for people to improve their life, while other feel that this is damaging the natural habitat and should end. In my opinion, economic growth create a variety of fields in jobs and it opportunities for people to find jobs.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o other countries such as converse shoes , it will promoted economic in the own co...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'promote'
Suggestion: promote
...ntries such as converse shoes , it will promoted economic in the own country to growing ...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... Therefore, many companies need to have a large number of employees to work in produced items so ...
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Line 3, column 683, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...conomics grow rapid, the government can helps offenders to find jobs and then everyon...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...ers to find jobs and then everyone have remain the same careers to improve their lives...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...zones. For this reason, people cut down a lots of trees to building factories so anima...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ve places where they live. As a result, a large number of animals are able to disappear or be ext...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96560846561 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50159757088 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526455026455 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3576388788 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7894736842 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73684210526 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346084906739 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103971660147 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109027593122 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233646031083 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755768557828 0.056905535591 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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