Task 2: In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In recent years, scientific research has becoming in a matter of discussion. Many individual companies pay for and invest most scientific study than the state. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and drawbacks of paying all research of science.
There are several advantages that private companies pay for and conduct most scientific research than the state. Firstly, finance of the government can assist many other fields such as education, healthcare and charity compared with only investing scientific research. For example, the state pay money for building roads, schools, health care and charity such as expanded highway, helps poor children go to school and provide a lot of modern technology and advance drugs for hospitals. As a result, it can build knowledge society and developed science. Secondly, individual factories have a lot of experience in inventing machine. For instance, normally companies recruit experts who have high qualifications and be skilled labor to create many achievement for both the own companies and society. Thus, the companies conclude most scientific research that is the best choice.
There are a numerous drawbacks that private factories rather than the government pay for and manage most scientific study. First of all, it own modern machine which they made because they paid and invented this project and did not involve the council. To illustrate, a company devised water filter ten years ago with a small their budget. They established a big company in Hanoi and bought this items with high cost. Therefore, it leaded to people inability to pay. Furthermore, the government does not intervene to scientific research and it lead to companies buy the private information to other companies due to earning their profits.
In conclusion, individual companies pay for and direct most scientific research rather than the state. In my opinion, the government should meddle with scientific invention because it brings a lot of success for human.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun achievement seems to be countable; consider using: 'many achievements'.
Suggestion: many achievements
...ications and be skilled labor to create many achievement for both the own companies and society....
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'drawback'?
Suggestion: drawback
...he best choice. There are a numerous drawbacks that private factories rather than the ...
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Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...most scientific study. First of all, it own modern machine which they made because ...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ished a big company in Hanoi and bought this items with high cost. Therefore, it lea...
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Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...intervene to scientific research and it lead to companies buy the private informatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36624203822 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77185165344 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544585987261 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4379358011 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6111111111 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05555555556 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383918713098 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138510981481 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135599779924 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264705382244 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270836770025 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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