Technology has facilited our lives so much and given us a lot of freedom some people believe that this freedom has caused more problem for us. what is your view?
Nowadays, technology is breakthrough invention by human. It has given more freedom and improved the quality of our life. There are many people believe that the more freedom has created more problem for us.In my point of view advances technology are helped to people freedom or improve living facilities but also I do not argue to it is attracted to problem.
First and foremost, modern sciences has made many facilities in medical sciences and it improves to as compare to past. It has also helped to socialization and communication to other countries and it has helped in globalization. A good example for this, in past same fetal diseases has not been solved by medical science. But in present time it has been solved with help by advances technology in medical field. Again although, we have achieved to reduction in birth and death ratio.
On the other hand, technology has increased marking our lives comfortable, as well as destructive strength. For instance, with the help of technology, we can do everything to make our lives comfortable. It is also effects on our health problem. In addition, government has most focused on makes weapons and experiment on space exploration so that they do not have understand to what problems suffer their citizen. This thing we can say that the drawback of technology.
To sum up, all statement technology has some pro and cons of freedom. It has given us several contributions to make life better but also has caused problems. And people may lives comfortable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Message: Use past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99604743083 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86874300877 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9763574978 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362125839415 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983496211303 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988675443685 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219781035024 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144080594873 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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