Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
Nowadays, more and more people are trying to optimize food consumption, leading to increasing of food demand. This essay will explain the reason for this phenomenon and give some solutions.
First of all, it is can obviously said that world’s population is increasing so that the number of food consumption will incline in order to satisfy people’s needs on food. This means that the higher population are, the more food will be consumed. Because of this, the demand of food across the globe will be high, especially in developing countries. To give some example, many countries in Africa such as Senegal, Sudan and Ghana which own higher population have experienced the increasing of food consumption. In addition, countries’ development is another factor that causes food demand’s increasing. This seems that diet patter changes as countries develop. Providing some explanation, the meat consumption is higher in develop countries like America, UK and German.
To see possible solutions, the international organizations could control birth rate in order that they could probably limit the over population. If the government limited the natality rate, it would reduce the food consumption. In addition, it can be admitted that international organization should look for food alternative for replacing common food such as rice, meat and fish. For instance, WHO and FAO should do a campaign in order to make people change their protein and carbohydrate source, due to meat, fish and rice experiencing a decline.
In conclusion, it can be said that over population and countries development are the causes of this trend. Proving the solutions, limiting birth rate and replacing food sources are the way to deal with this phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'canned'.
Suggestion: canned
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33454545455 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96347796565 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552727272727 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3713003562 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28173080826 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103805690186 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593494473292 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18159844061 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282971780977 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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