It is said that business in the modern society frequently boast their products in various forms of advert. There are many reasons for this phenomenon and such trend has both positive and negative developments as now will be discussed.
Several reasons can explain why investors are so keen on promoting their goods. Firstly, they have a strong desire to boost the income of the company in which they are investing in since the more demands for their products, the more money they earn. A good example is a chain of 3CE companies which sells lip tints and other cosmetics has experienced an upward trend in the revenue thanks to it's advertising. Secondly, advert allows them to raise a company profile and maintain it. If they are well-known, it means that their new launched products are wellcomed and they can take advantage of this event to maximize profit.
This trend brings business tons of merits and one of them is building a good image of their company and another is making profit. Despite the benefits mentioned above, I believe this may also cause many detrimental effects on both company and consumers. The primary disadvantage is that getting expose to too many advert is likely to annoy or disturb the customers if they are watching movies or studying and need a great sense of concentraton. Another drawback is the so-called products could worsen the reputaion of the business since the real quality of their goods doesn't meet the desired effects.
In conclusion, lots of reasons can explain why business emphasize their products and this brings both beneficial aspect and detrimental one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97769516729 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57343064677 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3254157263 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267161179851 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983360799919 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771152039653 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188177950209 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547788126423 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.