In their advertising ,businesses nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in someway.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In the age of globalization today when local and international firms having equal chance to compete to gain customers’ attention to their products, it is hard for them to stand out among counterparts without containing unique feature called newness. This factor may refers to new markets, materials, structures or prices of the products . As a consumer ,I strongly believe that this is a positive progress.
Expanding products to new nations means the company could enhance their profit margin ,market share by reaching more potential buyers. The reason is the local area where that company located only provide a limited amount of consumers with predictable revenue every year. The organizations aspire to widen their sizes with higher returns surely may struggle to deal with these issues. Take Japan is a typical example ,most people in the world have agreed that Japanese products are efficient ,light and durable. However ,only a few world-wide successfully giants come from there ,namely Toshiba ,Honda or Canon - electronic products makers since they venture oversea with the prepared mind of boosting their sales while other local brands merely concentrate on their stable profits in internal market..
Another newness feature may also imply the changing contents in products. The products makers nowadays with the aid of the technology means could post and introduce their products in English as international language via online shopping websites as Amazon ,eBay independently. This is easier for both native residents or foreigners to compare and review the quality and cost of the products in the same category. Hence ,by adding sophisticated texture ,manual making or complex structures elements and reasonable price tags ,the companies would gain more advantages than their rivals. Therefore, it is clear to comprehend reasons why they doing so.
In conclusion ,it cannot be denied that offering the newness elements in some ways as new target market ,new innovations of companies’ products could enhance the percentage of product being bought and increase their profits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45987654321 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7157566231 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682098765432 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5480614948 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.357142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247342476705 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799579411385 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439445617928 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151111995855 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195913203218 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.