Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day.
Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?
In many parts of the world, and in many different sectors, more and more people are staying at home rather than commuting to work.
Opponents of home -working say that being together in a workplace with colleagues is a vital part of keeping people healthy and happy. Staying at home, never meeting people can lead to depression .They also say that ,from a professional viewpoint, it is important to spend time in formal and less formal situations with co-workers .Although it is argued that interaction can happen via computers ,especially with a visual elements such as video conferencing, they do not believe this can ever replace face to face contact.
For me, the advantages of working from home more than outweigh disadvantages. To begin with, many officers prefer home working, saying they function more effectively as they could relax, without the pressure and waste of the long commute. With new technologies placing people in the same room metaphorically, it is much easier to do this. With less travel there is a smaller carbon footprint, although this is a claim which has yet to be proved since many people choose to live in remoter areas and car use is not significantly reduced when working at home.
In my opinion ,working at home enables many people to join the workforce who would not otherwise be able to do so .This option is particularly liberating for women due to the fact that they often have more caring responsibilities.
In conclusion, I firmly feel that working from home is the fairest and most efficient choice for most people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91287878788 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80378521775 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3164532541 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.111111111 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26870025638 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132169296418 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079835905812 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152884329819 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411077326278 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.