There are an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbours. What causes this situation? How to solve it?
In the current contemporary society , the development of technologies and the momentous effect of the COVID-19 pandemic have minimized the contract between individuals. Hence, an increasing number of inhabitants tend to be more introverted and less communicative with their surrounding neighbors. The further paragraph will discuss and give the opinion On the one hand, modern technologies have influenced people to initiate conservation efforts through visual platforms rather than direct contact.Thus , although living in a high-density era, a majority of citizens do not recognize or contact their neighbors. Furthermore, several rules and accessories implemented during the current epidemic's fight have reduced the number of conservations among residents.Based on the current problem , although the pandemic has a substantial effect on the contact between inhabitants , there are still several problems that can solve the issue above. For instance, the apartment representative can eliminate some laws when society controls the epidemic or encourage citizens to set up online meetings to increase contact between owners. As a result, any person can make a plethora of breakthroughs in social contact and recognize their neighbors.
In conclusion, it is hard for people to be confident and have an open mind when starting a conservation with their neighbors in the current world situation . Nevertheless , each inhabitant should learn and be more social , otherwise people in the near future will be insensitive and scared of the outside environment.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75982532751 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28676747267 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620087336245 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5529841025 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.875 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142779832373 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627756925888 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512922914965 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111556084228 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00274108173203 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.72 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In the current contemporary society , the development of technologies and the...
^^
Line 1, column 499, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...al platforms rather than direct contact.Thus , although living in a high-density era...
^^^^
Line 1, column 503, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...latforms rather than direct contact.Thus , although living in a high-density era, ...
^^
Line 1, column 760, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Based
...number of conservations among residents.Based on the current problem , although the p...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 788, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...g residents.Based on the current problem , although the pandemic has a substantial...
^^
Line 1, column 872, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ffect on the contact between inhabitants , there are still several problems that c...
^^
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...neighbors in the current world situation . Nevertheless , each inhabitant should l...
^^
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e current world situation . Nevertheless , each inhabitant should learn and be mor...
^^
Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...habitant should learn and be more social , otherwise people in the near future wil...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75982532751 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28676747267 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620087336245 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5529841025 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.875 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142779832373 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627756925888 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512922914965 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111556084228 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00274108173203 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.72 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.