Young people who commit serious crimes, such as robbery or violent attacks should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the recent years, young offenders committing serious crime are starting to increase significantly due to the current pandemic and the unstable world situation. Hence, a minority of individuals believe that these youngsters should be punished as the same way as adult. From my perspective, I highly agree with the notion above, the further essay will discuss and give reasons to my opinion.
On the one hand, young offenders already have several basic knowledge about laws and the activities. For instance, adolescents with sufficient opportunities to receive minimal education already have a basic knowledge about whether their actions are harmful are not. Young offenders swindle and take part in violence activities are the result of a lack of education from parents and school. Thus they should be heavily punished, sent in prison and camp to re-educate them and teach them to control their actions and re-built their thought. Moreover, although teenagers think that their behavior and actions have a negligible impact on the society but in reality they could destroy life of individual or maybe several people.
On the other hand, if laws and the current contemporary society donot punish these teenagers, they will influence the psychology and attitudes of other youngsters. In particularly, if the society do not punish young offenders who commit several violence, the others will have a though that their negative actions won’t be condemn. Moreover, young people who have stayed in prison or re-education camp could have a plethora of breakthrough in understanding about violences and crimes issues that the country is facing. In general, according to the Vietnam government news, over 80% of the teenagers who had stayed in prison and other re-education camp have changed their life and have a more positive perspective about the surrounding life.
In conclusion, young offenders should be well punished the same way as the elder. Otherwise, whey could impact on the mind of a whole generation and could influence the education system of the country which they are living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: some violence
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2921686747 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78012374525 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524096385542 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8610878287 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184713821836 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756969250916 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847827476229 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12955886336 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626223403468 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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