There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
A variety of music types are in existence around the world today. Music plays a crucial role in our daily life for our emotional needs and I would argue that traditional songs are more significant than modern international ones for a country.
Music can be a source of entertainment that accompanies us throughout our lifetime. For instance, it can be seen that young children are taught songs at primary schools as a means of learning language or as a form of enjoyment. Also later in life, we develop our favorite music genres which reflects our lifestyles and temporary moods. All in all, music, defined by a combination of melody and lyrics, can even be a better visual than words and portraits. Therefore, it would be a pity if music leaves our world.
There are various reasons why the traditional music of a country is more important than the modern ones. International songs are quite catchy and fun, but in fact, they are no more than commercial products which are marketed and controlled by businessmen. However, the cultural music has the ability to display the culture and customs of each ethnic group or nation. Since, the rich history of our humankind can only be found in beautiful descriptions of old generational genres such as country, instrumental and classic. The government and the local community itself are also responsible to prevent traditional music from disappearance.
In conclusion, music is an inseparable part of us as it brings excitement and meaning to our lives and traditional music should be given more importance than international songs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ortance than international songs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14122137405 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96351618524 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3404297285 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.615384615 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404856556431 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162674550433 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11284486889 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276201111288 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490528212222 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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