There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
With the globalisation, music is evolving around us. International music is gaining popularity as compared to local traditional songs. The question arises, why is music required by an individual? and is the growing international music more important than old school local music? The following essay will discuss the above-mentioned points.
Firstly, the music is food for the soul. For centuries songs and tunes have been used by humans to mark and commemorate many events. Music helps in happiness and in sorrow. For instance, playing a wedding song during a ceremony enlightens the overall mood of the gathering. Similarly, for some people tunes are a source of motivation and inspiration. For example, people indulged in gym activities find music helping in overall motivation and concentration during the workouts.
On the other sided, International music is as important as traditional music nowadays as it is helping to bridge differences among different cultures. People from different countries religions and languages listen and understand the similar language of music. A recent example is football world cup song by a Columbian singer which was on the top charts for long periods of time across the globe. Thus highlighting the importance of international music.
Moreover, listening to a particular kind of music is an individual's preference and in the recent times, there has been an increased popularity of international music among the youth. They strictly follow the international trends and consider it a sign of better sociability. A recent Justin Beaber's concert in India depicts the popularity of international music in India. This proves that international music increasing popularity is an important part of globalisation.
On the contrary, the traditional music is a national asset. It is the best description of any countries culture. But the overall growth and globalisation are actually helping in sharing such cultural values thus favouring the growth of music from over the world.
In conclusion, music is a part of human history and has been utilised for centuries on the different occasions. International music popularity is helping in sharing the same language of music and sharing the different culture. It is agreed that growth of overseas music is important. Need of hour is to take measure and special events for the local music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37365591398 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12132197706 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2936943355 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8846153846 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513022718142 0.244688304435 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166826462357 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117762616575 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296213265963 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102036090169 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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