Today we are taken aback from substantial number of music which are bringing in an every hour, perhaps in an every minute. So are there any advantages of listening to music or we just addicted ? Below it is going to be explained on whether conventional music is superior or international.
It has been said that when the ideas could not be described via words, the music had been created. Music is the weapon which are used to emphasize an extraordinary emotion. It might be a greatest of the human being. Since ancient period people were used to sing and listen to the songs, especially in the crucial occasions or when they felt morally tired, so this tradition has carried on till now.
Moreover, most nations have their own type of music in which grown with cultural attitudes and it still is appreciated by the nations. In every country its citizens are attempting to keep their mentality, to grow their children as perfectly as they can. In this place majority of people reaffirm that orthodox music play an essential role in bringing their children up. This music tells about us the truth about our ancestors. Even though they have passed away a long time ago, we are aware of their heroism by the help of national music.
Nevertheless enormity of conventional music, it seems young generation went off listen to this. Some type of world music such as Rap, Rock etc. as more influencing teenagers rather than national one. It is not a secret that many parents consider listening such kind of music as an abhorrent, hence they attempt to protect their children from violently behavior shaping. Of course minority of people may let their kids listen Lil Wayne’s music which full of hate and sexual talk.
To conclude, I strongly believe that conventional music is playing and will play an essential role in our life, especially it is crucial in order to grow children mentally healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, kind of, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85582822086 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59322528952 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0716980615 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9444444444 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27709640184 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096435098975 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520221757313 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155840029322 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598225817273 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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