Music has become an essential part of daily life since people have their own awareness. Then, what makes it that important, and it is sometimes claimed that historic music of a country is more significant than over the world. This essay will discuss what people listen to music for and comparison between native and nationwide music.
First of all, Enjoying music is a way to bring relaxation, which is underestimated because of its familiar concept in ordinary lives. Famers, workers, officers or even children have their own frustrating moments through the tasks all day long, such as studying, cultivating and producing, if it happens over and over again without leisure, the stress will overwhelm them and cause works worse, so the easiness to access and high entertainment for all ages of music could help them get through. As an illustration, students are able to be themselves while listening to pop music, and according to recent surveys, workers put more efforts and either the quantity or quality of the products they produce is much better. In short, music gives us some chilling out moments to be more effective and more optimistic
In millenniums, music has been separated and each of them presents their own tradition of the hosts and certainly, it is more important than International music. Through several incidents like wars or innovations, there are several kinds of music which individually show their costumes that make the whole culture. Every characteristic of the citizens is expressed by the beat, the soundtrack and especially the lyrics. For instance, in Vietnam, composers make songs in the war against the invasion of the United States in order to motivate Vietcong and in peace, those songs are used to memorize that war. To sum up, although worldwide music has some impressions, the traditional still better on account of its historical and involvement to the local.
In conclusion, music is an instrument for us to unleash the stress from work. Moreover, the scale between native and International music sides to the first one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13313609467 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79714131031 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600591715976 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9779213176 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.461538462 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355237392307 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131734504381 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093953301874 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229968662026 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465622635005 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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