There are many different types of music in the world. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, there are variety of music are available such as folk music, hip-hop,motivational music and so on. Music plays a vital role in everyone live and without it life become boring. Both types of music has their own place in their respective countries. However, I believe that the widely popluar music is more significant and quite popular than from the ancestral music.
There are certain benefits of having music in life. Firstly, the music acts as a stress buster. Due to the hectic schedule the people donot have enough time to relax themselves. While listening to music they feels more energetic and can continue his worl with the enthusiasm. Secondly, it is a major source of entertainment. As it helps to change the mood of a person dramatically. Therefore, music become an indespensable part for celebrate the different occasion. Even it is a small birthday party to the event of business success, music is the first priority for all the guest.
However, in today’s nation, mostly the people give preference to the International music because of the globalisation, mostly the people attracts by it. In addition, the people get a chance to explore the new culture and thought of the other countries by adapting the global music. Another factor is that the genre of music has been boost and the cultural music mix with the foreign music which has totally change the meaning and lyrics of the music and thus it leads to the decline in the interest of people towards folk music.
To conclude, although the ancestral music connects the people with their roots yet the popolarity of the international music has attract the people among it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , motivational
...re available such as folk music, hip-hop,motivational music and so on. Music plays a vital ro...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...life become boring. Both types of music has their own place in their respective cou...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...emselves. While listening to music they feels more energetic and can continue his wor...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... it is a major source of entertainment. As it helps to change the mood of a person...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...come an indespensable part for celebrate the different occasion. Even it is a sma...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...ith the foreign music which has totally change the meaning and lyrics of the music and...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'attracted'.
Suggestion: attracted
...polarity of the international music has attract the people among it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96043165468 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77131836423 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7135028863 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461873451411 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159300801499 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101740113525 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302959538086 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728428599126 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.