There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In modern times, immigration seems to be a prevailing trend as people seek life in different parts of the world other than their own homeland. In my opinion, there should still be certain rules to regulate those who get to travel freely between nations as this trend have resulted in both positive and negative outcomes.
Regarding the migrants themselves, I think that countries should readily open their doors to those who are desperately in needs. A good example here is that thousands of refugees and displaced war victims in Arab were allowed to stay in Germany, where they could find accommodation and supplies of food and medicine, after countless bombings to their own hometown. A similar argument can be made for those who can contribute to their hosting nations such as decent businesspeople, as they help to motivate business growth and increase national revenues. In contrast, people who committed serious crimes, especially murdery, should be deliberately prevented from making pass to other nations' frontiers as they may cause a lot of trouble to the communities they will be a part of.
Freedom of movement can also affect countries in different ways. On the bright side, most notably, it can act as a catalyst to the process of exchanging diverse cultural values and boosting economic development of all countries involved. This point can be illustrated through the many cosmopoltan areas and world-class business centers found in the U.S.A, where millions of people choose to settle in annually. However, it is evident that at times, as people abandon their homeland to find a future elsewhere, both the original and the hosting countries will suffer. For example, while in popular metropolese like New York or Paris, overpopulation is exerting tremendous pressure on infrastructure and facilities, poorer cities in the Cambodia or Laos are struggling as there are not enough working people around.
In conclusion, I believe that as allowing free travelling has both pros and cons, it needs certain restrictions to allow countries around the world to function properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...class business centers found in the U.S.A, where millions of people choose to set...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86721933448 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616071428571 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6293560271 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.666666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224816804403 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761691423483 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347697256363 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123426858664 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364403063956 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.