There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
Countries have different levels of strictness and distinct in rules and procedures imposed when it comes to immigration. And yet, people always have the vision of moving between countries for many reasons, and the most predominant one is improving the quality of life. Even though moving in to live abroad has pros and cons, I heartily believe that people of a country should not be allowed to live in a different nation. In this essay, I will elaborate on the pros and cons of living on different continents.
One advantage of living abroad is that people get to increase their quality of life. Unsurprisingly, people always keen to get better life experience, and one way is to immigrate. However, this can be a win-win situation in which countries and those people get benefited. Take the American teachers, who teach the English language for ESL students in Japan, as an example; they travel there to settle down and to get paid higher than teaching ESL locally, in the United States. If they had not gone to Japan, they would definitely consider going elsewhere, as they seek top paying countries such as the United Emirates. On the other side of the coin, the country would benefit from their existence since the citizens will get an astonishing English language education without leaving Japan.
Hurting culture is one of the downsides for admitting people from abroad. Ruining culture is a serious matter and affects not only the current generation but also negatively impact future endeavors. This can be seen clearly in Los Vagus, California, where you get the feeling you are not in the United States anymore. Nevertheless, it is adjacent to Mexico, and a lot of people speak Spanish. This ruins not only the spoken language but also the culture since the Mexican culture is distinct from the U.S.
In conclusion, being permitted to moving into any country comes with pros and cons. Overall, a nation's decision-maker, who allows people to live in their homeland, never expects to have an open, bright door for a nation's prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...exican culture is distinct from the U.S. In conclusion, being permitted to moving...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...ntry comes with pros and cons. Overall, a nations decision-maker, who allows people to li...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ects to have an open, bright door for a nations prosperity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96511627907 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65360964197 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.789857808 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349243942389 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108969560701 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793720089284 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206926174971 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10068600096 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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