In this contemporary era, plethora of folks have became and are becoming shopaholic and like to buy umpteen good and branded clothes. However, earlier masses used to do shopping only according to their needs whereas nowadays, people do it to spend their free time. I partially agree with this statement and will be discussing this issue in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with agree side, youngsters and adolescents are more influenced by shopping because some of them totally depend on their parents and do not earn money by their own, so they spend money blindly on shopping things. Moreover, somewhere celebrities also pave the way to some individuals to buy thing unnecessarily because they are role models of public due to which public copy their each and everything. In addition to this, beauty of malls and discount on various items embolden people to shop.
In contrast, grey haired masses and mature ones are not enslaved by this trend because they had seen ups and downs in their lives and know value of money. Furthermore, middle class group only spend money on needy goods, do not shop casually. Lastly, some folks know their financial resources and needs of that in various works so they don’t shop blindly.
In conclusion, though affluent families and new generation have hobby to buy things yet some individuals shop according to their needs. Ergo, high class people and youngsters should know the value of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...contemporary era plethora of folks have became and are becoming shopaholic and like to...
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Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ous items embolden people to shop In contrast grey haired masses and mature ones are ...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... needs of that in various works so they dont shop blindly In conclusion though af...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'class'' or 'class's'?
Suggestion: class'; class's
...shop according to their needs Ergo high class people and youngsters should know the v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, lastly, moreover, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94537815126 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44981044506 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 238.0 20.2975951904 1173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1177.0 106.682146367 1103% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 238.0 20.7667163134 1146% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 98.0 7.06120827912 1388% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252707936037 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252707936037 0.084324248473 300% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164535844146 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292039429633 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 120.9 13.0946893788 923% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -161.63 50.2224549098 -322% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 94.9 11.3001002004 840% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.91 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.89 8.58950901804 220% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 97.2 10.1190380762 961% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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