These days a considerable amount of advertising is directed at children. should it be banned because of the adverse effects?
In parallel to advancement in technology and hiking demand for entertainment, the number of advertisement has increased significantly. Of late, the trend of advertising directed at the juveniles has captured attention. I am in complete discordance, which will be explained in the following paragraphs.
The predominant reason, why I believe that this type of advertisements should not be tabooed is that, these sorts of advertisements bestows a great deal of knowledge related to the product. No doubt, that the goods are associated with offsprings. Moreover, prohibition on advertisements which is directed at the children may be paramount reason in swinging up the problem of unemployment as an ample number of civilians earn their two square meal in this sector. consequently, giving freedom to broadcasters to direct the advertisement at children has a bunch of merits.
Furthermore, how this type of advertisements contribute remarkably in spreading the awareness among people pertaining to children concerns? Let's elaborate the answer of this question with an examples, Amitabh Bachchan in an advertisement transmit a message to citizens related to polio immunization to their offsprings which played an important role in stimulating people to curtail the ailment of polio at a large extent extend. It is apparently seen that, this kind of advertisements could be lucrative for the development of children and there should be no room for banned on these type of advertisements.
To recapitulate, advertisements acts as light which throw light on information of a product. To put in a nutshell, I pen down saying that the idea of tabooed on such type of advertisements does not fully holds water.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40823970037 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.494115063 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.111177306 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279100374294 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102002986352 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075728631376 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160319343054 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746894376804 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.