Owing to seeking for a job, individuals of several countries have to migrate apart from their loved ones to foreign cities. Although shifting to another country for working could have some drawbacks, it seems to me that the benefits of this vogue overtake them.
The predominant tengible detrimental effect is that developing nation would not be able to prograss, due to this trend. To explicate it, should teachers and doctors go to abroad for attaining jobs, poor nations will deprive from basic amenities namely education and medication.For example, when people living in underprivileged nations suffer from a critical condition, they may have to rush into hospital of other countries because of scarcity of doctors in their home country. As a result, people could have to encounter such circumstances. Furthermore, migrated people may be mentally week as they would have no emotionally support of their beloved ones.
Nevertheless, there are several benefits why people go to another country for working. Firstly, they would be able to find satisfactory job along with a handsome pay sacles.In other words, developed nations have various renowned companies in which people are paid double salary as compared to their home country. To exemplify , in recent years, approximately 20 lakh residents of indian have migrated to Canada for working purpose; consequently, they due to good salary are achieving their desires. Secondly, working on a international level has their own benefits. To elaborate it, if a person complete minimum two years of experince in a foreign country, he/she can be demanded widely. For example, needless to say, the demand of truck driver in the UAE is on the peak level as the heavy licence of this nation is acceptable internationly. Thus, it opens door for several opportunities.
In conclusion, even though it could put a adeverse effect on the development of a poor country and psychology of a people migrating to another country, i, indeed, believe that it is more advantageous of migrated people because they can earn a telephone figure salary and get experince at an international level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26979472141 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96622259015 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577712609971 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.2210051227 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.357142857 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175475981582 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662225619102 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388772073851 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114000481157 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298255024354 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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