These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
The issue of banning dangerous sports can be a hugely controversial topic and can cause heated debate among people who hold strong views on this issue. I strongly believe that we should have a solution to decline the risk of extreme sports and contribute to helping people have to see open-mind about dangerous sports.
some people argue that the head of the country should ban dangerous sports. they are the first view that dangerous sports are a reason related to permanent injuries or even lethal injuries for the player. second, they seem to see dangerous sports players often play at public locations like parks, pavements, and roads. so, it will create a risk for walkers or residents living around here. Recently, statistical accidents in extreme sports increased. therefore, they feel scared and worried. so they believe that banning dangerous sports is essential.
However, some people hold the view that dangerous sports are necessary and government should not ban them because they will create issues social badly. The first issue makes people feel they have lost their freedom. therefore, it leads to a evoke of social hatred to reclaim their freedom of theirs. The second issue is that it will cause the loss of the job of players in dangerous sports, so they will become unemployed, leading to expanding the government budget to help there or even increasing evil social.
Although it would be hard for these two groups to understand each other’s viewpoints, it is essential to try to reach a compromise. In my opinion, we might be able to ease this conflict by ensuring that player participates in dangerous sports sure, wear protective gear, and a player should play at a location sure safe and do not affect people
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- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03793103448 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53575853417 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8179647825 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110586275809 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409937611994 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316643075329 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745251559319 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159503030214 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.