These days ,too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine , rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, some people believe that they don’t need healthy habits but medicine will be helpful if something happens to us and will be relying on doctors. However, other people think that following a healthy lifestyle is better in many ways. In my opinion, the benefits of the latter point of view outweigh those of the former. This essay will discuss why it is a better option.
First and foremost, health is an individual's own responsibility not a doctor’s. Most people tend to behave like its doctor’s responsible for curing diseases. I think that phenomenon is related to the lack of people’s health education. According to a study, in the last decade, preventable diseases have increased such as cardiovascular disease, diabetes. In contrast, contagious diseases came first worldwide in old times. Preventable diseases have direct correlation to healthy lifestyle, if you do exercise regularly and eat more organic foods, you might be prevent diabetes as well as obese.
Fortunately, a healthy lifestyle is trending now on social media, young adults want to go to the gym that’s positive effects on others. On the other hand, some people think that is a waste of time and they strongly believe that I don’t have time to go to a fitness club. In scientific articles, people who have regular exercise tend to have a good immune system, which means you don’t easily catch colds or other diseases. So, if you suffer from a certain disease, it will not only be a waste of time but also financial.
To sum up, I totally disagree with relying on doctors. Finally, it is your health not theirs. People need to take responsibility for their own health by following a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...ption. First and foremost, health is an individuals own responsibility not a doctor’s. Most...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, well, i think, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01408450704 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80686592663 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5396932847 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7647058824 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222000088827 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669111442739 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551686166631 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137513292425 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490351047499 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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