Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different opinions about the role of advertisement in the high sales of products and whether it is essential in our modern business. I strongly agree that the power of advertising has a significant role to play in the revenue of a company and it is not necessary in our society.
Advertisements tempt people to buy their goods that they do not need. For instance, by paying people to endorse their products, companies are likely to seduce a great number of consumers who are fans of the celebrities. This could lead to great revenue that a company gets from a small amount of money paying to celebrities. Furthermore, the information about certain goods of a brand could be informed to customers. Without advertising, people find it hard to learn more information about these brands. Consumers would have more chances to access more information about the varieties of goods and they, therefore, could have more choices and make comparisons about products from various brands to opt for suitable ones.
Besides, I would argue that consumers would not only buy items because of advertising. Many products that serve their demands and sometimes are must-have items. Smartphones, for example, are really essential for an individual these days due to its benefits and efficiency. This could attract consumers without putting more resources into advertising. Moreover, many prestigious, reliable companies spell plenty of products without the need for advertisement. Although a company is small and local, its reputation spreads across the country and their goods are well-known because of its reasonable price and quality. As a result, these companies are successful in attracting more consumers and gaining great revenue by investing in the quality of products rather than designing creative advertisements.
In conclusion, while advertising has an impact on the number of products sold in the market, I am positive that it does not mainly affect consumers’ decisions on purchasing their needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35220125786 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97801896738 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2392289151 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136149873464 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490084114584 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565678751757 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897363794568 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291973105351 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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