Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising is one of the most powerful methods that consumers can attract to buy goods and product which is not necessary for them. I strongly agree with this idea.
Investments and companies use different ways to sell their goods and products. Advertising is one of these ways that can help to attract more consumers. To begin with when people see many different advertisings in different places, it can affect them to buy unnecessary goods. It particularly happens for women who witnesses different ads about kitchen’s tools; although those products or kitchen's utensils seem useless, they are tempted to have them in their houses as the token of wealth or social prestige.
Another point is the content of any ads which are very important to manipulate the other’s minds. Some ads are produced either by an especial famous actor or actress who has effects on people to purchase goods. Other use an especial music and theme to show their goods. It needs an innovative mind to makes effective ads that make people buy unnecessary things. There are many ads that are useless but by a good subject manufactures can sell their goods. It is art that every investment should know. As a result, Advertising have effects on people who do not need to buy any unnecessary things.
Finally, it is very important to use ads appropriately. Although many companies use different sport teams to show their goods as ads, they do not have any relation to these teams such as Coca-Cola Company. So that people should be aware not to buy unnecessary things because of their stars.
In conclusion, I think that Advertising is a powerful tool that investments and companies should use to sell more of their goods.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...onsumers. To begin with when people see many different advertisings in different places, it ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'manufacture'?
Suggestion: manufacture
... that are useless but by a good subject manufactures can sell their goods. It is art that ev...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93055555556 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70701534882 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506944444444 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0620162668 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5294117647 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114809732835 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404489177021 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425662166987 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808153970466 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465994514881 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...onsumers. To begin with when people see many different advertisings in different places, it ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'manufacture'?
Suggestion: manufacture
... that are useless but by a good subject manufactures can sell their goods. It is art that ev...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93055555556 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70701534882 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506944444444 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0620162668 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5294117647 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114809732835 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404489177021 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425662166987 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808153970466 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465994514881 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.