Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising is one of the most powerful methods that consumers can attract to buy goods and product which is not necessary for them. I strongly agree with this idea.
To begin with investments and companies use different ways to sell their goods and products. Advertising is one of these ways that can help to attract more consumers. When people see many different advertisings in different places, it can affect them to buy goods that they do not need. It particularly happens for women who witnesses different ads about kitchen’s tools; even if they do not need them, they will be persuaded to have them.
Another point is the content of any ads which are very important to manipulate the other’s minds. Some ads are produced either by an especial famous actor or actress who has effects on people to purchase goods. Other use an especial music and theme to show their goods. It needs an innovative mind to makes effective ads that make people buy unnecessary things. There are many ads that are useless but by a good subject manufactures can sell their goods. It is art that every investment should know. As a result, Advertising have effects on people who do not need to buy any unnecessary things.
Finally, it is very important to use ads appropriately. Although many companies use different sport teams to show their goods as ads, they do not have any relation to these teams such as Coca-Cola Company. So that people should be aware not to buy unnecessary things because of their stars.
In conclusion, I think that Advertising is a powerful tool that investments and companies should use to sell more of their goods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...attract more consumers. When people see many different advertisings in different places, it ca...
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Line 4, column 421, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'manufacture'?
Suggestion: manufacture
... that are useless but by a good subject manufactures can sell their goods. It is art that ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82918149466 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67264288147 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498220640569 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2824619482 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8235294118 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155225369328 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518345521773 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502366514113 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993866318655 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491691726516 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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