Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era, advertisement becomes particularly prevalent in boosting the sales of consumer merchandise even though they could not be considered as actual essentials of the community. I partly agree with this view and will give my reason below.
Advertising can lead people to be spendthrifts when they tend to spend too much cost on purchasing loads of unnecessary goods or items. Specifically, the acquisition of K-pop idols' items becomes a hot trend of almost all young generations in recent years. Many idols' posters, accessories, or albums are incredibly hunted by their fans from all over the world despite the high price of those goods. After that, they are not used effectively by the consumers; instead, they are just displayed at home as valuable decorations. Through many attractive advertisements on social media, teenagers just struggle to achieve their ambition and feel satisfied with those products.
On the other hand, the common range of advertisements cannot affect consumers if they have strong perspectives or have a reasonable spending plan. People who are financially savvy have a tendency to manage their pockets very well. Thus, they not only make a one-month budget for buying some essentials but also stick to that budget to avoid being broke in a mid-month. As a result, lively and impressive advertisements on both social networking sites and official public media are unable to appeal to them to buy any goods if their needs are not actually met.
In conclusion, it is not completely true when all of an increase in sales of well-known consumer products is the result of advertising's power. In my viewpoint, it really depends on the lifestyle and the demand of each person which are totally different from each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12195121951 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92416919105 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.962387828 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173419512037 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530980486812 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398348429844 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100125910946 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124313725019 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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