Today large shopping centers and supermarkets are common than small local shop. Is this a negative or positive development?
Nowadays, enormous commercial centers and supermarkets are more prevalent than traditional shops. In my opinion, while this development plays a vital in our society and brings a lot of benefits for customers such as convenience, I am convinced that this evolution has also a disadvantageous influence in our life as infectious diseases like covid-19.
To begin with, it has been widely demonstrated that giant shopping malls and stores benefit for clients such as convenience. In reality, the restaurants, clothing and shoe shops and recreational areas, and so on are combined in a skyscraper. It is undoubted that this development helps to shorten, namely the distance and time, and economize a great deal of money for travel costs. As a result, customers can make the purchase a lot of the products in the same place, being extraordinarily convenient. A good example of this is the biggest shopping center named Vincom, appealing to a huge number of consumers owing to its convenience.
On the other hand, it is obvious that large shopping centers result in the increase of infectious diseases such as covid-19. In the fact that enormous trade centers and supermarkets attract many consumers because of the convenience. This is the reason why this disease can dramatically rise. This can be evidenced by a shopping mall in Hanoi city which houses a large quantity of goods. The city’s authority found out one patient suffering from covid-19, and approximately five days later, this landmark have to be closed. As a consequence, this gives rise to a serious problem in our society.
In conclusion, from my perspective, this development has both advantageous and disadvantageous influences in today’s life. Whereas giant commercial centers benefit consumers with their convenience, they trigger some issues about infectious diseases like covid-19.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33788395904 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17022043643 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9117591561 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.266666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263885540275 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885225345014 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494865243846 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152799392869 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419712183842 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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