Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Traffic and housing issues could be addressed by moving giant enterprise, factories and their worker from city to the rural areas. I utterly concur with this view. Moving big companies, factories help to tackle problems in terms of transportation such as traffic congestion, and housing such as high-priced apartments of the skyscrapers.
To begin with, it has been widely demonstrated that transportation problems such as traffic jams could be solved by moving the giant companies, manufactories to the countryside. In reality, it is undoubted that inhabitant density witnesses a downward trend, resulting in giving rise to positive impact in transportation, namely the decrease of traffic congestion. As a result, without exaggeration that moving enormous enterprise, factories help to ameliorate traffic jams. A good example of this is Hanoi city. The government implements an empirical research that moving Vingroup corporation to the outskirts, and the outcome being traffic congestion has been plunged.
In addition, housing issues such as the high-prices apartments of the landmarks could be tackled by moving big firms, factories to the countryside. In the fact that the need for accommodation increase dramatically, leading to rise highly the price of apartments. Hence, it is obvious that people from rural areas have a difficulty in making purchase a house. As a consequence, housing problems could be radically addressed when the cost of apartments is reasonably-priced. This can be evidenced by my family. The government made a decision that moving manufactories to the outskirts, resulting in declining the price of the apartment and now we possessed our house.
In conclusion, I completely agree with this statement. Moving giant firms, manufactories, and their operative to the countryside help to tackle the problems related to transportation such as traffic jams, and housing such as high-priced apartments. Hence, the government should soon interfere and make wise decisions to radically solve those problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5974025974 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31326038571 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493506493506 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2541698805 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.411764706 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302019470309 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10036830336 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070715365567 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206993606745 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515151737624 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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