Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why Is it a positive or negative development

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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?

In recent times,there is an increasing number of children play video games excessively and rarely do physical activities. The essay discusses possible reasons for this and I believe that the drawbacks outweigh the merits.
In the first place, if that continues for so long, children will become a game-addict and rely much on computer. They can spend a dozen of hours on computer without cease. Furthermore, their intellectual and physical could also be affected. They will much less concentrate on their study and of course, the study result will be worse. Computer games can also make them physically ill and more sluggish. Their problem-solving ability will be slower. According a survey conducted by Stanford university, teenagers who play less video games are more sharper and more active than others who don't. Being Glued to the computer screen continuously causes many visual illness. For example, children will be short-sighted at an early age.
Nevertheless, it also has some advantages, for instance, video games make it easier for teenagers to unwind and reduce stress after a strained day at school. Not only do they feel relaxed but they also become more connected with others, thus practicing their teamwork skills which is an essential for their career in the future. Because many games often involve playing with other people, so if you want to win, having the teamwork skills is indispensable.
In conclusion, playing computer games can be advantageous in some ways, however, children must know when to stop and draw the line between study and games in order not to affect their test results.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15648854962 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74927084537 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2450750555 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141195369927 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514517922208 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438488060739 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932639251816 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028510128303 0.056905535591 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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