Today, many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world?
Technological products play an important role to human daily life. Smartphones, computers and other electronic devices appear everywhere and we think we cannot live without them. This make the necessary natural world have been forgotten due to the present of the high-tech equipment which are made by human to support them with everyday tasks. From my point of view, the natural world is very essential and we need some serious action to remind people the importance of the mother nature is.
Parallel with the phenomenal reason of nowadays "smart world" there are other excuse. One of that is strict schedule of working force people go to work much of their time and after work they have very short time to take care of their family and life. In other words, they don't have many redundant occasions to explore or learn about the nature. Moreover, city's living innocently make the distance between human and natural world with concreate buildings, roads and vehicles. Factory and human production activities also make this distance even larger indirectly by destroying forest and wildlife. Another point is children don't have much time to discover the nature. They spent their time to study compulsory curriculum such as math, physic, etc. and the amazing world of nature is occasionally discuss through the photos.
However, there are several ways to solve this matter. Firstly, ecotourism is the best idea to help people know more about the impress of nature and other interesting aspects. Secondly, using media as a tool to educate people about the harmful consequence that people have made. For instance, the regular of reducing plastic bag to protect ocean creatures and natural soil due to the non-degradable of common plastic or prevent the hunting natural species or cutting down the trees specially which are in danger. The last but not least, children is need to know more about how meaningful life that nature have brought us such as fresh air, beautiful creatures and more by certain activities. For example, extracurricular activities such as camping, hiking to natural area.
In conclusion, the busyness of earning money and lack of knowledge about wildlife are the reasons that make people thing wrongly about the importance of the natural world. By using right method, people can know more about this and be encouraged to take care the natural ecosystem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14432989691 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5644057917 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559278350515 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.997194357 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387466176189 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103693601622 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835737295808 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242341501514 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812477975892 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.