Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?
In modern era, providing online mobile banking greatly assists people to instantly and quickly deliver amount of money both to their closer ones and colleagues. This issue, personally I believe, would bring considerable merits for several reasons which I will elucidate more below.
Perhaps, in my standpoint, to transfer amount of money which use mobile banking could be accessed 24/7 hours without queue on bank centre. To illustrate, digital payment on academic atmosphere greatly assist parent to pay tuition fee their children with a few seconds. Moreover, providing internet transaction such as PayPal significantly supports young entrepreneurs to introduce their products to foreign customers, even more expanding the business internationally. In connection with mobile-friendly and convenient use, such transaction offers stringent security measures to ensure that selling and buying international items are away from fraud (phishing scam).
On the other hand, it seems to me that the negative side of this potentially threatens personal data caused by fraudulent transaction. Following with data leakage, one of the most common accident is that ID number and password hijacked can be abused to other criminal action. Reported by New York Times, 18-year old hacker is able to access internal information of Uber system due to its weak security. In addition, inadequate infrastructures such as unstable internet and power outage might cause delayed payment on business transaction. Seemingly, this might frustrate customers and lost its revenue due to the reliance of telecommunication, therefore, both consumers and suppliers could experience disappointed to digital payment method.
In conclusion, while the ease of online transaction process seems to bring the drawbacks to some extent, I would contradict that the advantages of this are more significance both personal and business life. This includes flexible transaction and international business expansion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80068728522 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12465064001 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1200222281 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158050309728 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509307919093 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345072266713 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087527425619 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171650645875 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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