Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for people who visit such places?
People’s behavior and conception of travelling is changing day by day and exploring new place becoming a trend in whole word. Now a days, travelling is converting as a passion, so many people want to travel risky and difficult place like Antarctica, Sahara desert and Mount Everest. This essay will examine the arguments of both merits and demerits on given topic.
First and foremost, for travel lovers visiting new place can be more advantageous, as they are felling bored traveling normal all the time. Such types of touring help to create wonderful memory in life and can be blessing for travelers. Similarly, they can explore different nature, experience new climate and various flora and fauna, this help to find new innovative ideas in changing world. For instance, scientist are trying to find lives in March in today’s world, whereas, this types of travelling can be beneficial for them for new innovations. Moreover, touring in risky places can be beneficial for the development of such places in term of transportation and others facilities and can create new tourist spot, which can helps to contribute on tourism industry. Such as, Nepal is famous for risky expedition, mountaineering and trekking, from which huge amount of royalty and tax is collected every year.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages of travelling such risky destination as well. Some people believe that, life is not more important than touring, so risking life only to travel new place can be silly things. Furthermore, such types of travelling can make new place polluted as others, due to increasing population on those place. For example, w all know that highest peak of the world, is becoming polluted due to travelers and this is becoming serious problem.
In conclusion, exploring wonderful places in world can be good experience but people need to think about the pollution of place as well. There are both advantages and disadvantages of touring different place, travelers need to try balance themselves, whereas, government also need to impose some strict law for the conservation of such places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16034985423 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82589865988 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536443148688 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3183455326 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266028970086 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951914702665 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536477248254 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166543426512 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141840370956 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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