Today more people are overweight than ever before. what are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?
In modern society, the increasing level of obesity is becoming an alarming issue in many countries. Some culprits must be found, and some methods to tackle them should put into practice.
In fact, there are 2 main culprits for this problem. Firstly, with the expansion of the fast-food supply chain such as mc Donald,coca-cola, Pepsi,...So that, many people choose fast-food instead of handmade food. but they do not know that this food is unhealthy. secondly, many people have a sedentary lifestyle. In other words, the lack of exercises than before. For example, most of us are working as an officer and using personal vehicle to work. Meanwhile, we are too busy with work and do not have enough time to do exercises. This eating habit with an unhealthy lifestyle makes a lot of people get obese.
Some methods for this problem could be applied to deal with obesity. To begin with, the government should encourage their citizen to do more exercise. they also have many campaigns about the harm of obesity in order to many people can gain knowledge about it. lastly, each person should build a healthy diet and cut down their amount of fast-food. for example, we should get up early, do morning exercises and prepare handmade food for the whole day long.
in conclusion, obesity is a serious global problem, it can harm the development of many countries. so that, to tackle this problem is not only each person but also all the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , coca-cola
...fast-food supply chain such as mc Donald,coca-cola, Pepsi,...So that, many people choose f...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...chain such as mc Donald,coca-cola, Pepsi,...So that, many people choose fast-food ...
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Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...n such as mc Donald,coca-cola, Pepsi,...So that, many people choose fast-food inst...
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Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ose fast-food instead of handmade food. but they do not know that this food is unhe...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...o not know that this food is unhealthy. secondly, many people have a sedentary lifestyle...
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Suggestion: They
...rage their citizen to do more exercise. they also have many campaigns about the harm...
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Suggestion: For
...and cut down their amount of fast-food. for example, we should get up early, do mor...
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Suggestion: In
... handmade food for the whole day long. in conclusion, obesity is a serious global...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...harm the development of many countries. so that, to tackle this problem is not onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82591093117 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55567903954 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7026429753 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.1176470588 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114036454287 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423680047733 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370979418781 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669602319862 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289370125575 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.