Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solution.
In this modern era, technology is reached in each and every path of life. The lifestyle of individuals is decreasing day by day. there are various reasons behind this problem. My views will be outlined in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are countless reasons behind this problem. Firstly, the biggest problem in the cities is that people in the big cities are facing the problem of traffic conjunction in which the lot of time of the individuals is wasted. As well as, it also causes pollution in the big cities which is very harmful for everyone and also for environment. To be more precise, a large amount of pollution in the cities is caused by industries which are polluting the water and air. Moreover, this is causing many diseases to the human being.
Furthermore, in the cities due to the increasing of population the most of people do not have the accommodation space. Therefore, in the big cities packed food is available and people ate packed food by which individuals is facing many health related problems. For instance, recently survey was conducted in which most of the people who are living in the urban areas are facing many problems as compared to rural areas.
However, behind every problem there is also some solution too. people in the cities should use public transport which reduces traffic problem and the pollution also. industries should be far from cities. individuals should eat healthy food.
To conclude, there is plethora of problem in the cities by which the quality of life is changed. If individuals work on those solutions then that problem should be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97802197802 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60508329277 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1690282723 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137059186449 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446798800794 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590369945799 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782051997451 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548010399707 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.