Life in this modern era is arduous journey. Both parents are working to fulfill their children need yet it impacts with positive and negative ways on children life. Some people think that it is good thing yet some are contradicting to this statement, let discuss.
On the one hand, there are numerous benefits on children development. Primarily, they will take education from well admired schools and that can enhance their knowledge and creativity as compared to other schooling peers. Apart from that, they can take a part in any type of activities even if it are expensive for them as an example like to learn cricket sports that need a coach which is expensive to them. Moreover, children will be able fulfill their wishes also as buy a expensive toy. Besides that, children can properly focus on their goals as they no need to think about money.
On the flip side, loneliness can kill the future of children and them also. First of all, isolated children will preyed by some diseases like depression and obesity. Alone children will become mentally disturbed as they cannot share their problems with parents. As well as empty mind devil's house, they can start violence and can crime. They will start abuse with parents. Future of children without parents is in dark. Thus it is important that one parent stay at home to look after them.
In the epilogue,no doubt that some people are facing the financial crisis yet spending time with children first is more important rather than work
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, no doubt, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87843137255 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35126083791 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1185742518 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175752544979 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604900202287 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366088093819 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104706682485 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294221248693 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.