Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, lifestyles of younger people is changing and It's become more competitive with time. Media and television play a vital role in this case which increase their desire to adapt foreign lifestyles also Educations are important key that create a competitive environment between teenage students which lead them to stress full period. This essay will discuss why adolescents are lead their life with so much pressures.
As we can see that, youths are more attracted by foreign culture and their demand increasing with time. Teenagers want to be more smart and try to follow all trends if they dont have ability to gain something according to their choice then they are suffering from frustrations which make their life stress. Such as, some teenage want to buy a i-phone but, due to cost issues if their family deny them to give this phone then they feel pressures to managed money by themself. So, their habits one of the main reason to make their life more critical.
Presently education system is one of the most pressurized thing for youth. In past, there was less opportunities to study for folks but day by day, it increasing with time and now parents are more concerning about their children studies. Some of parents and Institute make their education system more complicated and hard to teenagers by rise some competition between students. As example, some parents think that achieving higher score in exam it is the sign of better a student. In this case, they feel more pressure to achieve their desire score in exam. Which is the another main reason for youth to feel stress all time.
To sum up, Its not about that, in past that teeangers were not in under pressured but presently, They feel more tension about their life because they influenced by western culture and want to lead more fancy life with also another pressure from their parents or society to achieve best result in their exam. I think, if we can control this errors from a teenage life then they can feel relax and live a stress less life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...changing and Its become more competitive with time. Media and television play a v...
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Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...adolescents are lead their life with so much pressures. As we can see that, youths ...
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Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rt and try to follow all trends if they dont have ability to gain something accordi...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they dont have ability to gain something according to their choice then they are ...
^^
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ress. Such as, some teenage want to buy a i-phone but, due to cost issues if thei...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...f the most pressurized thing for youth. In past, there was less opportunities to study ...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun opportunities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...zed thing for youth. In past, there was less opportunities to study for folks but da...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the parents') or simply say ''Some parents''.
Suggestion: Some of the parents; Some parents
...oncerning about their children studies. Some of parents and Institute make their education syst...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m more complicated and hard to teenagers by rise some competition between student...
^^
Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...th to feel stress all time. To sum up, Its not about that, in past that teeangers ...
^^^
Line 4, column 274, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'achieve the best'.
Suggestion: achieve the best
...essure from their parents or society to achieve best result in their exam. I think, if we ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 335, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... their exam. I think, if we can control this errors from a teenage life then they ca...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7994269341 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38515577497 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532951289398 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4703991193 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137052660657 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537983801845 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333671824372 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942306855481 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152601266928 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...changing and Its become more competitive with time. Media and television play a v...
^^
Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...adolescents are lead their life with so much pressures. As we can see that, youths ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rt and try to follow all trends if they dont have ability to gain something accordi...
^^^^
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they dont have ability to gain something according to their choice then they are ...
^^
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ress. Such as, some teenage want to buy a i-phone but, due to cost issues if thei...
^
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...f the most pressurized thing for youth. In past, there was less opportunities to study ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun opportunities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...zed thing for youth. In past, there was less opportunities to study for folks but da...
^^^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the parents') or simply say ''Some parents''.
Suggestion: Some of the parents; Some parents
...oncerning about their children studies. Some of parents and Institute make their education syst...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m more complicated and hard to teenagers by rise some competition between student...
^^
Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...th to feel stress all time. To sum up, Its not about that, in past that teeangers ...
^^^
Line 4, column 274, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'achieve the best'.
Suggestion: achieve the best
...essure from their parents or society to achieve best result in their exam. I think, if we ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 335, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... their exam. I think, if we can control this errors from a teenage life then they ca...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7994269341 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38515577497 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532951289398 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4703991193 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137052660657 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537983801845 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333671824372 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942306855481 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152601266928 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.