Through the years of globalization, many job specifications have emerged to compensate the need for progress. In this light, there are people that support the opinion that university education is not important as long as a person has the skillset in the field of job applying for, whereby it is projected by some that job qualification will perhaps disregard formal education. Although, without diploma could be acceptable in some reasons, the writer believes that college degree will still be an essential tool to consider to be employed, especially that we are in the era of rapid technological developments.
Apparently, in some fields of employment, specifically in the blue collar job sector, practical skills are extremely important. As long as a worker knows how to skillfully carryout a specified task to achieve the desired outcome of a job, automatic they will be hired. As an exemplification, backhoe operators, welders and tile settlers does not need school to teach these kind of bread and butter, these are learned through observation and practice. Therefore, it is quite acceptable to say that diplomas are not vital to be qualified in a job in the near future.
However, nowadays, the swift developments in technology have been changing the perceptions of every individual especially in a forseeable mind set. In the technological field, complex systems of algorithms are needed to effectively produce the desired program. Programming is so perplex that only those who have proper education can handle and fix the system. Furthermore, the rise in the utilization and effectivity of artificial intelligence will greatly affect the source of income of skilled workers. Robots are now being used in some manufacturing industries, which are obviously more efficient than manpower. Ultimately, work offers for white collars basically corresponds to a degree, which for some entering in a graduate school is a plus to be qualified. It is a need to enhance further theoretical knowledge to be effective in pursuing success in the chosen career.Nonetheless, having these reasons, it is more plausible to acclaim that the vitality of a degree in education is far greater.
Given these compelling statements, in my opinion, both of these are crucial in a specific field of employment. But, the fact of the matter is, in a future perspective, it is undeniable that university graduates have better oppurtunities in landing a job.
To sum up, while blue collar jobs focus mainly on practical skills, which the employment in this field is open for everyone. It is a stronger weapon to have the theoretical knowledge to sustain our future needs, at the same time to be competetive in our chosen field of generating income.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...me time to be competetive in our chosen field of generating income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, while, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22954545455 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18308335236 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7285599206 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175703239054 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555871537108 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413517221335 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958499628576 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274197190635 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.