TOPIC: It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Taking risks, both in the working environment and in personal life, is argued to be crucial for people in this era. To be honest, I do believe that the benefits of taking risks are significant, far outweighing the drawbacks. As a result, it helps people to practice their dare-to-do thinking and to be mature in their personalities.
It can be discussed that taking risks assists people in their mental training which is dare to think dare to do. People, especially the young generations, are often content with their current results and do not want to try to achieve higher achievements. This is because when they are satisfied with their present positions and see those are the best results, they will not have adequate motivation to boost themselves in attempting to get better consequences. Only when they accept all the challenges coming to their lives, their souls naturally think about the way to get to those new lands and their hearts create motivations which help them in forming doing behaviours. For instance, in the past, President Ho Chi Minh of Vietnam considered several ways to save his nation and tried his best, even being taken to prison for many years overseas, to turn his aim into a real situation. Consequently, Vietnam currently is one of the independent countries in the world.
Moreover, daring to accept risks helps human beings to be more mature in both their thinking and their doing. Being mature is a good way for a person to meet and establish a good and long-lasting connection since they have enough capacity to consider what is good and not good when communicating with others. Additionally, in romantic relationships, it is vital for people to clearly see whether the others are the right partners who can go with them on their remaining paths. Romeo and Juliet's story is a good example when mentioning an immature romantic relationship as both of them chose death rather than planning positive ways to deal with their families.
In conclusion, taking risks is a heated topic for every generation to discuss and see whether it is necessary or not. However, according to my opinion, taking risks is associated with some positive aspects which are far beyond the negative ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dared', 'durst'.
Suggestion: dared; durst
...eople in their mental training which is dare to think dare to do. People, especially...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96246648794 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75637118329 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55764075067 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7154434954 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328931227749 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122675749189 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800766661548 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224758529567 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699344635974 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.