Topic: More and more people choose to work at home and students study from home as the development of computer technology makes it more convenient and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In this hi-tech era, Peoples are mostly using advanced technologies in their daily life. However, with the help of the internet, this computer technology makes it possible to work from home. The plethora of job holders and pupils attract to this modern way of work and study. work from home has compelling benefits and has some cons. this essay will highlight both sides of this.
To begin with advantages, work and study from home give more time to spend with other important things. Although, women have more time to give their children's, which mostly waste on the road and pupils also spent that time on their studies. For example, job holders and student mostly spent one to two hours on the road and a total of this time in a week equal to one working day if both use this time for other important work, it should be better than wasting on the road.
On the other hand, despite the positives of work and study homes yet has some serious problems. if people start work and study from home with the help of a computer make some social issues and some worse mental issues. Research shows that people who spend their time with a limited number of people are losing their thinking power and not able to get new ideas and get depression. they do not have new friends and also cut off physically their other relatives.
In conclusion, job holders and students can save their time of traveling to do work from home, but on the other hand, they cut off with friends and their coworkers physically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...friends and their coworkers physically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60074626866 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16994535473 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511194029851 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5073958972 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8461538462 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235158125286 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984048695131 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719296001865 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145171947663 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252607781296 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.