Topic: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is thought that people should accept unfortunate circumstances while others argue that individuals had better face those challenges. Personally, I agree with the second opinion because this brings us a successful life and the feeling of satisfaction.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people would accept to live with tough circumstances. This is because they fear to risk their current stability to make a change which requires perseverance and sustainable enthusiasm. These days, there are many people who are not satisfied with their current work, but they are afraid of changing their jobs because their recent income is still enough to live, and they are not sure whether the new jobs will bring them a better or poorer salary. As for some parents with two children, the situation will be even worse if their new jobs’ payments are lower because they must earn enough money to bring up their kids. Obviously, accepting those situations keeps people’s life safe and stable.
On the other hand, every person should try to face challenging circumstances as this will brings them a feeling of success and happiness. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo used to be poor when he was a child and he always dreamed about being a renowned soccer player. However, football was not popular in his city at that time and everybody believed that poor children like him would definitely accept a life as a blue-collar worker with low income in the future. However, he trained very hard until he was 15, he walked over 30 kilometres from his hometown to Lisbon Capital City to enroll in the City’s football team. After undergoing several harsh exercises, he finally became a member of the team and nowadays, he is one of the most excellent footballers in the world. His hard work has become the inspiration for many people, especially teenagers. Plainly, this has proved that overcoming difficult conditions help people to achieve their goals and improve themselves.
In conclusion, embracing tough circumstances may guarantee people’s living at a quite acceptable level but each of us should confront those challenges to live a more meaningful and unregretful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... challenging circumstances as this will brings them a feeling of success and happiness...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, second, so, still, thus, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15966386555 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85102602215 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602240896359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2760216412 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110575580958 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403843924979 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375245075841 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711808533505 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333085879648 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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