Topic: Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life complex and stressful. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary epoch, it is apparent that computers are commonplace devices in every life’s aspect for many of us. This results in a controversial issue over whether it makes a great contribution to our world or negatively affects the development of society. In this essay, both views will be objectively delibrated prior to a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, there is no denying the fact that computers have some detrimental influences on our security and health. To commence with, due to the poor understandings of computers’ funtions, many seniors struggle keeping abreast of updated news, or are at serious risk of being attacked by viruses and hackers. Hence, the elder will hold adverse perspectives about computers’ complexity and be left behind. Moreover, spending a great amount of time staying in front of the computers triggers plenty of physical and mental health problems. Excessive workload on computers can easily force people to stick their eyes on the screen, which leads to shortsightedness, dizziness and obesity.
On the other hand, we can derive many benefits from computers when it comes to productivity and interaction. To start with, computers appear to be technological advancement gear toward businesspeople with a view to staying organised, corresponding over emails. As a result, workers can get tasks done straightforwardly, organize tables which have lots of calculations, sort names out in shorter length of time but more of exactness. Furthermore, it is obvious that computers provide another way to communicate. It is not obligatory for people to commute to their workplace all the time since since online meetings and cyber-chatting become more and more preferrable. In research of Melbourne University about productivity revealed that about two thirds of IT employees reported an increased productivity while working from home.
In conclusion, although computers bring some detriments, I strongly believe that they play a indispensible part in our life owing to the aforementioned points. It is advisable for users to weigh up the pros and cons and have a proper view of using the computers for an effortless future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to keep'.
Suggestion: to keep
...puters’ funtions, many seniors struggle keeping abreast of updated news, or are at seri...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: since
...commute to their workplace all the time since since online meetings and cyber-chatting beco...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ents, I strongly believe that they play a indispensible part in our life owing to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, third, while, in conclusion, in short, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37536656891 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26258953922 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624633431085 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7710801728 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226117314234 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667276682083 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347355554247 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129072956963 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308980926398 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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